Kash Poet Poet Monoku

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mom's frail fingers wiping teardrops from father's smiling face....






**It was my father's death anniversary....

© 2011 kashinath karmakar (8th September 2011)
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Placement:2nd;(September 2011)

Contest:Write it in one 
Line,Please

Sponsor:Constance La France

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Placement: 1st;(September 2011)

Contest:Verse any Theme/Form maxm.8 lines.

Sponsor:Brian Strand

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Debbie Guzzi September 30, 2011 at 7:58 PM POWERFUL as was the gesture as she did it ;) congrad's dear wish you still had him! Light & Love

Don Johnson September 30, 2011 at 6:32 PM Yes mate, i miss my dad too, great poem here, gets the emotions, just a bit, here...

Sara Kendrick September 30, 2011 at 6:31 PM Congrats on your winning emotive work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 30, 2011 at 11:38 AM Congrats Kash on first place win with these brilliant and beautiful words my friend..luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown September 30, 2011 at 9:59 AM Good morning and congratulations on your 1st Place win in Brian's "Verse" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Afroze Ali September 11, 2011 at 11:40 AM congratulations Kashinath for your win, this is a very touching poem.

Lee Ramage September 11, 2011 at 12:11 AM Excellent! I just love this poem, so touching. Great win, congratulations. Lee

Charlotte Puddifoot September 10, 2011 at 7:15 PM congrats on your win in the contest with this emotional monoku...

Caryl Ramsdale September 10, 2011 at 4:55 PM placement congratulations for your win in the "Write it in one line, Please" contest. CR

Jack Horne September 10, 2011 at 10:53 AM Many congrats for all your wins, Kash : )

Carol Sunshine Brown September 10, 2011 at 8:17 AM Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Write It In On Line, Please" contest. A very well deserved placement Kashinath. Love, Carol

Lori Lucas Mcclure September 10, 2011 at 7:39 AM Congratulations on your wonder win!!!!!!!----Lori

Dr.Ram Mehta September 10, 2011 at 3:12 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance,kashi

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 10, 2011 at 12:01 AM CONGRATS KASH ON SECOND PLACE WIN WITH THIS DYNAMIC MONOKU LUV..

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer September 9, 2011 at 8:09 PM Kash that is sure powerful-said well is so few words-congrats. to you!

Debbie Guzzi September 9, 2011 at 8:00 PM very real, touching..we have been there and will be again, congrad's light & love

Gwendolen Song September 9, 2011 at 1:18 AM Emotive--I bet you had tissues in hand as soon as you pushed the "send" button. Respectful tones of a son's love of parents. Another winner. Gwendolen Kash Poet September 9, 2011 at 5:49 AM thanks Gwen.This is a scene from my father's death anniversary.My maa was shedding tears while watching the photo album....kash

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2011 at 10:11 PM AWESOME. NOw you got it!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 8, 2011 at 4:25 PM oh so sweet and sensitive.. an emotional visual my friend... this will touch Constance deeply as I .. good luck luv...

Russell Sivey September 8, 2011 at 3:07 PM What a perfect visualization! Great picture painted by a great artist! You will do well in the contest!!

Wilma Neels September 8, 2011 at 1:54 PM This is a definite winner or my name isn't Wilma Kash ;)Absolutely love this! Good luck to you and thank you for your comment on my virgin attempt of the Pantoum lol.. Lfde Wilma

Caryl Ramsdale September 8, 2011 at 1:53 PM Well done my friend...CR

Nette Onclaud September 8, 2011 at 1:44 PM from wiping to smiling... greeat job, kashi; sheer delight!! winning's best, yeah!..:) huggs, nette

Sara Kendrick September 8, 2011 at 12:59 PM So expressive and emotive work..Reads lik a winner...Your presence at my work is very uplifting..Sara

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2011 at 10:20 AM ps, yours is a real WINNER

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