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Phoenix Rising

Fear of abandonment, not a mere dream,
presenting itself, as a life learning.
Innate bubbling joy, now no longer streams,
free will choosing, in sorrow stagnating.
Soaking in pain, consciousness contracting,
the Phoenix rises with a silent roar!
Rekindling hearts flame, into the sky soars!
No longer attached to fears and desires,
love thus gently outpours, keeping no score,
vibrant with bliss within, heart all afire!

29-March-2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 5:21 PM
this is my favorite part: SO cool: Phoenix rises with a silent roar!
Seeker Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 7:30 PM
Hahaha! Silent roar = sound of one hand clapping
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