Phoenix Departs

And then, the angel shouted, their ears perked

Those waiting shouted,  “We are gathered here ~ hiding.”

"The tales are true, dear majesty, and we doubted."

And, with a wisp, they, and the pheonix departed

 



Note: I would consider this poem to be Urdu

©2016 Bonnie Jennings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gupta Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 8:21 PM
Exactly... very shayari like... in the wake of reading , I almost exclaimed : keys baat ! how beautiful...
Jennings Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 9:16 PM
My goodness! Thank you so much! I'm so appreciative of your comment.
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