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Phoenix

The phoenix rises from the ashes after it was scorched by lower flames It soared higher despite the smoke but all's fair inside the game Everyone is played within the game but we must be a good sport I ask why receiving no reply but who needs the fake retorts? We climb levels to new devils ready to face what's bound to come They try to bind us, so we struggle but those with weak wills have never won

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Date: 9/18/2023 9:18:00 AM
Powerful words. I love poetry on strength and transformation.
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Jasen Ridley
Date: 9/19/2023 8:00:00 AM
Thank you so much I'm glad you enjoyed it Michelle. Blessings to you
Date: 9/17/2023 3:03:00 PM
This is a great poem Jasen and quite powerful. You set the scene well with the rising of the phoenix. The last line, in particular, is thought provoking. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Jasen Ridley
Date: 9/19/2023 8:01:00 AM
Thank you much Christina always good to hear from you!! Looking forward to a new one from you as you never disappoint!

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