Pho Ga

pond surface askew
wet sock frozen to my shoe
cold hands turning blue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 10, 2011 at 2:00 PM
Interesting, it took me a second to understand what you were writing about, but now that I know, very nice job! Keep it up; I liked this one a lot.
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