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Phew

The wind rushing past me The sun above The ground below Will i fall Or will i float? My heart beating fast Adrenaline pumping Head in full confuse Will i fall Or will i float? The ground is so close now Its going to hurt I could feel the pain right now I might not survive I'm Falling Definitely not floating! But then a soft landing Was it only a dream? Am i really alive? I looked around And saw that i was in my room "Phew! It was just a dream!"

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Date: 5/27/2012 12:02:00 PM
So good Anya....like it alot.....I say it to "Phew! It was just a dream!" - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/27/2012 2:38:00 AM
Hey, I like this a lot! Great job!
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Date: 5/27/2012 2:33:00 AM
Oh Yes Anya.....i know this feeling. It feels so real when it happens.....Shaz
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Date: 5/27/2012 1:43:00 AM
I love this,,,,, enjoyed reading very much,,,, you have a blessed day Anya ;}
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