Phantoms

imagination
through cool gray mist
phantoms drift
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 9:50 PM
I love how you tied this to the word imagination making it more concrete in the last two lines. well, I have many comments to catch up on since taking my weekend trip but i hope to review more of your haiku at a later date.
Mcclellan Avatar
March 26, 2012 at 7:30 AM
I feel the coolness of the ghostly beings... :) Very Nice!
A   Avatar
March 24, 2012 at 6:36 AM
Ann, a creepy image.. only cause I have to drive. Through mist every morning ... nice haiku'..Pd
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