Petty Bm

you gave me my girl
but you treat her like a pawn
to get back at me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 6, 2011 at 4:13 PM
This is a senryu, a very good one, haiku's deal with nature. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Senry%C5%AB
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