Petals In the Wind

I ran at the sight of the petals
Which swiftly flew past me,
In my little shoes I chased it
Thinking that an adventure this will be.

They floated,all purple against the sky
With no obstacles to block their way,
I ran over the hill and tried to reach
But by then they were further away.

The little petals danced to the tunes of the wind,
Every step they could master .
Which made me want them even more
And dashed behind them,faster.

When they did a glissade
And descended to about my height,
I jumped and caught few of them
My eyes twinkled with delight.

I gently opened my fist
But they seemed as lifeless as could be,
So I tiptoed and gave them back
To the wind where they'd be free.

They whirled around me in a circle
To this day in my memory this experience is pinned,
At last they left me with a magical fragrance
The purple petals in the wind..

By Sadaf Syed
For the contest 'Petals In The Wind'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/3/2013 6:47:00 PM
you did fantastic with your entry. I really enjoyed this frolic of yours with the petals. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 2/3/2013 5:12:00 PM
Ahhh!!I really like this one..The ending is especially poetic..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2013 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot xx
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Date: 2/2/2013 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!! :)
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:21:00 AM
How tender and sweet...giving the petal it's freedom...love this !! Well deserved win !! Congrats !!
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Date: 1/31/2013 9:13:00 PM
Sadaf, . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD
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Date: 1/30/2013 7:12:00 PM
You have done it very beautifully Sadaf.Enjoyed this very much.Thanks for visiting my poem.
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Date: 1/24/2013 5:31:00 AM
wonderfully written poem friend Sadaf.. Good luck in the contest :) Hug, Maria
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Date: 1/24/2013 3:58:00 AM
beautifully penned ....loved it...
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Date: 1/24/2013 3:57:00 AM
This is an awesome rhyme you've penned my dear friend, Sadaf. I love it, the wonderful image and the feeling. Thank you so much for sharing and your kind visit in one of my poems. Have a great day! love/hugs, Leonora
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