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Petals In the Wind

I ran at the sight of the petals Which swiftly flew past me, In my little shoes I chased it Thinking that an adventure this will be. They floated,all purple against the sky With no obstacles to block their way, I ran over the hill and tried to reach But by then they were further away. The little petals danced to the tunes of the wind, Every step they could master . Which made me want them even more And dashed behind them,faster. When they did a glissade And descended to about my height, I jumped and caught few of them My eyes twinkled with delight. I gently opened my fist But they seemed as lifeless as could be, So I tiptoed and gave them back To the wind where they'd be free. They whirled around me in a circle To this day in my memory this experience is pinned, At last they left me with a magical fragrance The purple petals in the wind.. By Sadaf Syed For the contest 'Petals In The Wind'

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Date: 2/3/2013 6:47:00 PM
you did fantastic with your entry. I really enjoyed this frolic of yours with the petals. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Date: 2/3/2013 5:12:00 PM
Ahhh!!I really like this one..The ending is especially poetic..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2013 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot xx
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Date: 2/2/2013 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!! :)
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:21:00 AM
How tender and sweet...giving the petal it's freedom...love this !! Well deserved win !! Congrats !!
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Date: 1/31/2013 9:13:00 PM
Sadaf, . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD
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Date: 1/30/2013 7:12:00 PM
You have done it very beautifully Sadaf.Enjoyed this very much.Thanks for visiting my poem.
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Date: 1/24/2013 5:31:00 AM
wonderfully written poem friend Sadaf.. Good luck in the contest :) Hug, Maria
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Date: 1/24/2013 3:58:00 AM
beautifully penned ....loved it...
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Date: 1/24/2013 3:57:00 AM
This is an awesome rhyme you've penned my dear friend, Sadaf. I love it, the wonderful image and the feeling. Thank you so much for sharing and your kind visit in one of my poems. Have a great day! love/hugs, Leonora
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