Petals

Flowers open wide
They ask to be provided
   At the end they close
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 17, 2008 at 10:42 AM
Interesting use of this concise form. There is a lot in your words for the reader to think about. Keep on writing! Karen
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December 17, 2008 at 6:22 AM
Very nice Haiku. The flowers coming alive then takinga rest. Loved it!
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December 16, 2008 at 9:54 PM
Nice Haiku Matthew, great 5-7-5 flow. Welcome to poetry soup...Raul
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