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A Tritina is a type of poem that consists of tercets. A Tercet is three lines of a verse that rhyme with one another. They may also rhyme by rhyming with another tercet. A Tritina has three as well as a final line. This totals a Tritina at ten lines. A Tritina repeats the final words of the tercet into the other two, so all three consist of the same final word and rhyme. However, the end words are rearranged in a specific order so the first would be 1/2/3. The second one would be 3/1/2. The final tercet would be 2/3/1. The concluding line in a Tritina would then incorporate all the final words of the tercets, once again specifically in the order of 1/2/3.

A Tritina does not need a specific syllable count in order to be one, but it is recommended that a decent and consistent scheme would be included in order to provide a better flow. 

The Tritina is a modern form created by cutting down the Sestina. Like a Sestina this form repeats the end words of each stanza. The form is made up of three triplets these use an end word order of 1-2-3,3-1-2,2-3-1. After the triplets comes an envoi constructed from a single line. All four end words must appear in this envoi in the order 1-2-3.

  1 2 3          - End words of lines in first tercet.
  3 1 2          - End words of lines in second tercet.
  2 3 1          - End words of lines in third tercet.
  (1 2 3)        - Words contained in the final line

 

My heart resembles the fragility of a petal. Blossoming behind metaphors within poetry. The beauty is in the grandeur of their silence. I portray my words for you to study my silence, but you seem blind to how I'm wilting like a petal. You always seem to believe it's the art of poetry. Would you still love me if I stopped writing poetry. Could you comprehend my timid tongue's silence, so I bloom in your garden as an evergreen petal. Seek my petal soul in poetry, beyond the silence.

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Date: 11/16/2023 4:51:00 AM
Ahhh!! Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K
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Date: 11/15/2023 7:02:00 PM
Congratulations, Silent! You want to be seen, heard in the quietness of your soul. Beautiful!
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Date: 11/15/2023 11:59:00 AM
This is wonderful, so I hope it scored super well. Congrats.
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Date: 11/15/2023 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Petal Soul" is an amazing write. Love how you worked the flower/poetry together. I am still learning how to write in Tritina. Looks like you are a master with it. Have a blessed day writing away...........
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Date: 11/15/2023 3:39:00 AM
i think this is a perfectly executed tritina; i like both the message and subject matter, and the word choices - congrats on your joint 1st place!
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Date: 11/14/2023 4:11:00 PM
Very interesting and lovely poem!
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Date: 11/14/2023 3:11:00 PM
Loved this! This form seems challenging. You did it well.
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Date: 11/14/2023 12:59:00 PM
A well composed poem, with deep meaning and great beauty. Congratulations, Silent One.
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Date: 11/14/2023 11:00:00 AM
Look at this - perfectly sculpted and right on the money. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 11/14/2023 10:35:00 AM
So beautiful it hits the heart with emotion. Not everyone understands metaphors or can read in between the lines. Me for one. Great poem. love phyl
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Date: 11/14/2023 6:11:00 AM
The beauty is in the grandeur of their silence--Seek my petal soul in poetry, beyond the silence---beautifully woven with poetic emotions, SO.
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Date: 11/14/2023 6:11:00 AM
As I read this insightful and moving poetry, a great grief came over me. For, unexpectedly, there are moments when we wither in the face of awareness that others do not appreciate the subtleties of our metaphors and allusions. The repeats and structure are expertly stitched together, and the verses flow naturally. This stunning poem demonstrates your command of the form.
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Date: 11/14/2023 4:33:00 AM
Well, silent one, I read and pondered the poem before reading the intro regarding the Tritina. After reading this wonderfully expressive write I was amazed upon reading all the "requirements" of the form. It reads so smoothly the repetitions and format were seamlessly subtle. Great poem and incredible use of the form
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Date: 11/14/2023 4:19:00 AM
I felt twinges of sadness as I read this...sometimes we wilt when we realize someone doesn't get the metaphors, etc... when someone doesn't see the silence behind the words. Yet, like flowers we continue to bloom regardless if anyone appreciates or sees our beauty. Such a powerful metaphor. I am faving this one, for it touched my soul. Have a pleasant day, Sara PS wishing you the best with the contest.
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Date: 11/14/2023 2:30:00 AM
- Deep and emotional poem, S.O. ... dare to be more vulnerable ... hold your breath and listen to the silence - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 11/14/2023 2:03:00 AM
I like the petal analogy, Well written Silent
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:47:00 AM
Ah funny i almost chose petal too for this, but decided not to, i used silence too, i think silence is a powerful language. Anyhow about your tritina i am in awe of how seamlessly your lines flow. And the way you’ve expressed so much using this form. Not everyone knows or can read between lines and metaphors, but sees it all as art when truth is theres so much depth to every word of a poet, and whenever i read yours, i feel so much, because of their evocative nature. I love that line would you
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Date: 11/14/2023 1:49:00 AM
Love me if i wasnt a poet, and then how you’ve named the poem “ petal soul” shows the fragility described in here. Especially “ im wilting like a petal “ “ fragility of a petal “ very simple words used here but they all hit so strong and deep, Thats exactly the power of your poetry. And i always feel no matter what a poet writes fiction or whatever, what they deliver through words is kind of a reflection of their thoughts and soul. Absolute pleasure reading you! Im sure will be a top winner! Goodluck

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