Petal Butterflies

Minuscule flutters,
White wings flapping through the day:
Petals in the breeze.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
May 20, 2016 at 7:04 AM
Awesome and refreshing. A jaw breaking 7.
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 11:18 AM
wonderful imagery in this delightful haiku:-) hugs jan xx
Gifford Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 9:58 AM
I enjoyed reading your butterfly haiku. Colorful butterflies do remind me of flying flowers.
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