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Pert Periwinkles

Pert Periwinkles 

preening and prancing 
in pretty pink petticoats… 
pert periwinkles  




11-14-2014

beautifulflowerhaiku

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John Michaels

Date: 3/12/2017 10:27:00 AM

Full-on alliteration-based Haiku! Love it!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/12/2017 7:45:00 PM

Thank you dear friend for your sweet compliments. Warm regards. Pandita

Cona Adams

Date: 1/11/2015 1:33:00 PM

Another seven, Pandita. Thanks for sharing.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 1/11/2015 2:47:00 PM

oh my goodness, Cona, you really brought sunshine into a day that was otherwise dreary! Many thanks my friend for the wonderful comments and compliments which support and help to encourage me further! All the best. Pandita.

Nathan D.

Date: 12/5/2014 7:23:00 AM

I love alliteration and you have a marvelous one here. thanks for sharing

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 12/5/2014 10:30:00 AM

Hi Nathan, I so very much appreciate your wonderful compliments. I too enjoy alliterations! Thank you for stopping by and reading my work! Warmest regards to you, my friend! Pandita

John Monteblanco

Date: 11/23/2014 9:39:00 AM

Very nice haiku you have here

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/30/2014 11:45:00 AM

Thank you dear friend for your wonderful compliments. Warm regards. Pandita

Jim Tidd

Date: 11/17/2014 12:19:00 PM

Very nice. Positively, perfectly pleasing present precious poetry

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/17/2014 1:25:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jim! Yes, indeed, the P's have it this time! In fact, I see an alliterative haiku in your comments which is certainly praising the letter "P":-)! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 11/17/2014 11:19:00 AM

Wow! This is a lovely haiku, and so is the alliteration! A beautiful painting, Pandita! From now on I will always look at periwinkles with a keener eye! /x/ paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/17/2014 2:34:00 PM

Thank you kindly my friend for your oh so lovely compliments! Yes, those little periwinkles are much more than meet the eye:-) lol! Pandita

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 11/15/2014 5:46:00 AM

Great alliteration superb imagery. Sanchez at her best. Love, Pandita, well done XXXX rajat

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/15/2014 4:47:00 PM

Rajat, I thank you kindly, my friend, for your wonderful compliments and thoughtful comments! I am so glad that you enjoyed this piece. Have a lovely weekend! Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2014 12:27:00 AM

awesome alliterative haiku!!!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/15/2014 4:45:00 PM

Hi Andrea, I am happy that this one grabbed your attention! It's always great to hear from you, my friend! Thanks for the applause! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 11/14/2014 2:58:00 PM

Pandita, you really bring these beautiful flowers to life with your amazing personification! The alliteration is awesome! Well done! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/14/2014 3:05:00 PM

Thank you dear friend for your sweet compliments. Warm regards. Pandita

David Meade

Date: 11/14/2014 2:46:00 PM

These sassy little flowers make a big show, your haiku captures them perfectly! All the best.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/14/2014 3:03:00 PM

David, I am thrilled by your superlative compliment! Thank you so kindly for your wonderful encouragement which means a lot to me. Warmest regards. Pandita