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Persuading Woody Tree

An oldest wood existing still with a ray of hope Enlightens her children with mighty words to cope. She speaks: Struggles are indispensable art of life We should stay faithful to God and hardly strive. Though humans aim to destroy us for money Always shower positive seeds dipped in honey~ Must pray not to lose our broken wobbly boughs, As many lives cling upon us with lamenting echoes.. 15-6-2020 First place in the Contest:-) Note:Written for" Let the pens flow -Rhyme poetry Contest" Sponsored by Jenish Somadas

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/7/2020 5:00:00 AM

This is inspirational, delightful and gorgeous at the same time Deepa. Really happy to see this placed #1. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)

V. Deepa
Date: 7/8/2020 3:42:00 PM

Hi Aditi mam, Thanks a lot for the appreciation and encouragement:-) I am happy to know that my poem is so many~ as described by you.:-) I am glad to see you always at the top too..:-)Best wishes.Much love:-)

Mohan Chutani

Date: 7/3/2020 5:06:00 AM

Deepa, faith in trees is faith in God and humanity. Lovely muse and win. Congrats. Mohan

V. Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 5:09:00 AM

Hello Mohan Sir, Thankyou very much for your constant appreciation,support and encouragement.:-) Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/2/2020 11:01:00 PM

A totally different take on the theme..Your imaginations are flying high..Great win Deepa..Congrats..

V. Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 3:58:00 AM

Hello Jenish sir, Thanks a bunch for the wonderful appreciation and encouragement.:-) I am glad to know that my poem won your beautiful heart:-) Keep inspiring us. Take care.Best wishes~Deepa

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/2/2020 1:38:00 PM

You have creatively conveyed a message about deforestation in this amazing WINNING poem! Janice

V. Deepa
Date: 7/3/2020 3:56:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your gracious visit and beautiful appreciative feedback.:-) Best wishes for you too. Keep writing.Take care.:-) Warmest regards~Deepa

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/15/2020 2:13:00 PM

Hello Deepa, the mother giving advice to her little seeds. Is very wise. Enjoy your day my friend. Love Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/16/2020 4:50:00 PM

Hello Deepa, you enjoy your evening my friend. Love Darlene

V. Deepa
Date: 6/16/2020 3:07:00 AM

Hello mam, Thankyou very much. Enjoy your day too.. Much love~Deepa