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Persuading Woody Tree

An oldest wood existing still with a ray of hope
Enlightens her children with mighty words to cope.
She speaks: Struggles are indispensable art of life
We should stay faithful to God and hardly strive.

Though humans aim to destroy us for money
Always shower positive seeds dipped in honey~
Must pray not to lose our broken wobbly boughs,
As many lives cling upon us with lamenting echoes !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 5:00 AM
This is inspirational, delightful and gorgeous at the same time Deepa. Really happy to see this placed #1. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
Deepa Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 3:42 PM
Hi Aditi mam, Thanks a lot for the appreciation and encouragement:-) I am happy to know that my poem is so many~ as described by you.:-) I am glad to see you always at the top too..:-)Best wishes.Much love:-)
Chutani Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 5:06 AM
Deepa, faith in trees is faith in God and humanity. Lovely muse and win. Congrats. Mohan
Deepa Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 5:09 AM
Hello Mohan Sir, Thankyou very much for your constant appreciation,support and encouragement.:-) Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa
Somadas Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 11:01 PM
A totally different take on the theme..Your imaginations are flying high..Great win Deepa..Congrats..
Deepa Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 3:58 AM
Hello Jenish sir, Thanks a bunch for the wonderful appreciation and encouragement.:-) I am glad to know that my poem won your beautiful heart:-) Keep inspiring us. Take care.Best wishes~Deepa
Canerdy Avatar
July 2, 2020 at 1:38 PM
You have creatively conveyed a message about deforestation in this amazing WINNING poem! Janice
Deepa Avatar
July 3, 2020 at 3:56 AM
Thanks a lot for your gracious visit and beautiful appreciative feedback.:-) Best wishes for you too. Keep writing.Take care.:-) Warmest regards~Deepa
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 15, 2020 at 2:13 PM
Hello Deepa, the mother giving advice to her little seeds. Is very wise. Enjoy your day my friend. Love Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 4:50 PM
Hello Deepa, you enjoy your evening my friend. Love Darlene
Deepa Avatar
June 16, 2020 at 3:07 AM
Hello mam, Thankyou very much. Enjoy your day too.. Much love~Deepa
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