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Personification of Quiet

I came upon quiet the other day, It was over by the little pond Out of everyone’s way. I wasn’t looking for it, I was in a hurry. But there it was by the Oak and big rock, With nary a worry. Of me it may not have been aware, I tiptoed and spied on it’s presence, Out of place it seemed, calm and fair. Contemplating nature’s essence. It cast it’s gaze upon some lime green duck weed, And absorbed a whispering breeze Gently tossed a ray of sunshine into the trees, And smiled a flutter into some leaves. It’s peaceful countenance rested in a family of Sand Hill birds, Majestic, unhurried and together, On their morning walk, speaking of nature without words, Musing and of a feather. Quiet, it seemed to me Was a contemplative being, The more I watched it, The more I began seeing. It shivered slightly sensing it’s breeze, And fluttered a gaze back to it’s leaves I came upon quiet the other day, As if by prophetic accident, But I got busy and turned away, I wonder .. I wonder where it went ..

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Date: 11/10/2011 9:11:00 AM
It's always worth the search and find treasures like these. This has a feeling of peace and tranquillity to hush the weary soul. So lovely dear friend - Love, Elizabeth
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Date: 1/6/2011 12:11:00 PM
Awesome treat Robert! Another beautiful one, my friend. Goes to my Favs. List! Thank you for your kind comments and taking the time to read my poems. Love, audrey
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Date: 1/4/2011 10:17:00 AM
Super write, Robert. I just wrote one about too much quiet. ybada ybada ybada. Love, Dave
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Date: 12/29/2010 6:37:00 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your comments. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Robert. Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/25/2010 3:48:00 PM
This is so beautiful Robert and finding some semblance of tranquility in the craziness of life is good for the soul. Picturesque setting I can see it in my mind. Thanks so much for sharing! Hope your Christmas was wonderful. God Bless~Mary~
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Date: 12/21/2010 2:48:00 AM
Here in my middle of the night troll I came upon this jewel Robert. I love how you illuminate a moment of personal peace in this poem. It's much the same for me, occurring spontaneously, unplanned, and every bit as fleeting...yet so delicious when it shows up. Would that we could be less busy, more present in the now moment...Peace and Joy to you and yours Robert this Holy Season. You and your versatile body of work are the gifts that keep on giving. Lucky us!
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Date: 12/19/2010 12:20:00 PM
Tranqility and serene peace is what you've expressed so vividly here Bob. The imagery is amazing; it leaves the "personification of quiet" to the imagination of the reader. Are you looking at a bird or even a creature; or is it just the "quiet" you're admiring. We take the beauty of quiet moments for granted with all the hustle and bustle in our lives. Thanks for helping us slow down...long enough to enjoy this write at least. Love it! Lay
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Date: 12/19/2010 4:20:00 AM
You have nicely expressed your feelings on seeing a little creature ,Robert
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Date: 12/18/2010 8:56:00 PM
Isn't it amazing how such a small creature, perhaps a bird, can touch our hearts, Rob. You have captured such a tender moment. Now I, too, am wondering where these creatures go after they leave impressions upon us. Thanks so much for sharing this one. Love, Carolyn
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