Personality Claws

You talk with condensing tones
Crushing down on shaken bones.
You whisper secrets in my ears
That you say I had no right to hear
Your claws dig deeper year by year.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Bangalee Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 1:38 AM
Your claws dig deeper year by year/// beautiful expression and rhyming
Ashley Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 8:09 PM
The brooding tone of your poem is compelling, Jenny. Wonderfully done. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dillon Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 8:00 AM
thank you
Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 5:47 PM
Well penned, Jenny. Congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 5:39 PM
I liked this short poem you entered in the contest. Big congrats on your win
Dillon Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 8:00 AM
thank you lovely
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Chilling write, one which resonates because it's so true. You've nailed it here, my dear! Best always, Gershon
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