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Persistent Impermanence

flailing through life’s mist
                   a world of doubt bubbles up
                         pops in and remains
               

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          08/03/2021 N/A

allusionlifetruthsenryu

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Caren Krutsinger

March 10, 2021 at 6:19 PM

doubt "bubbles up" - this is exactly write!

David Kavanagh

March 11, 2021 at 1:55 AM

We can only be sure of our own thoughts sometimes, and they bring the doubt cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

March 9, 2021 at 11:45 AM

Remains of the Day

Christopher Flaherty

March 9, 2021 at 12:29 PM

David Kavanagh

March 9, 2021 at 12:08 PM

Everyday Christopher

Panagiota Romios

March 8, 2021 at 4:59 PM

Hi David...I wanted to be like Eve in the Garden and know everything.))) Will never happen and am way older than you. Studied philosophies of all kinds. Immersed myself in transformation. I don't need answers now! I am grateful just to be alive and do for others. Great Senryu. Very creative. Pangie**

David Kavanagh

March 8, 2021 at 9:07 PM

I totally understand Pangie, you and so many others have found contentment, but I certainly haven't, strange inexplicable things have happened in my life, yet random chaos is the only real answer I come up with, and it’s not satisfying my curiosity, impermanence I can deal with, but an infinite universe negates it, ie cause and effect, so this senryu keeps popping up, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

March 8, 2021 at 2:04 PM

oh boy, you have it remaining. That sucks, but i sure do understand it!!

David Kavanagh

March 8, 2021 at 2:19 PM

I sure do Andrea, the more I try to understand life the more doubt creeps in, even at a scientific level the very essence of creation spirals into dissatisfactory and unreliable answers, serves me right for searching I guess, cheers David

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