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Persistent Impermanence

flailing through life’s mist a world of doubt bubbles up pops in and remains Life at a glance contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose 08/03/2021 N/A

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/10/2021 6:19:00 PM

doubt "bubbles up" - this is exactly write!

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/11/2021 1:55:00 AM

We can only be sure of our own thoughts sometimes, and they bring the doubt cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 3/9/2021 11:45:00 AM

Remains of the Day

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 3/9/2021 12:29:00 PM

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/9/2021 12:08:00 PM

Everyday Christopher

Panagiota Romios

Date: 3/8/2021 4:59:00 PM

Hi David...I wanted to be like Eve in the Garden and know everything.))) Will never happen and am way older than you. Studied philosophies of all kinds. Immersed myself in transformation. I don't need answers now! I am grateful just to be alive and do for others. Great Senryu. Very creative. Pangie**

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2021 9:07:00 PM

I totally understand Pangie, you and so many others have found contentment, but I certainly haven't, strange inexplicable things have happened in my life, yet random chaos is the only real answer I come up with, and it’s not satisfying my curiosity, impermanence I can deal with, but an infinite universe negates it, ie cause and effect, so this senryu keeps popping up, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2021 2:04:00 PM

oh boy, you have it remaining. That sucks, but i sure do understand it!!

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/8/2021 2:19:00 PM

I sure do Andrea, the more I try to understand life the more doubt creeps in, even at a scientific level the very essence of creation spirals into dissatisfactory and unreliable answers, serves me right for searching I guess, cheers David