Persimmon

love long ago departed;
like persimmon buds; now, just
spring flowers ever parted
in afterglow of young lust.

Where pink flowers did carouse
soft, ripe red fruit heavy hangs 
on cold winters empty boughs;
and so induce hunger pangs,

for sweet flesh yet untasted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Goldsmith Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I must say, I have never had one. Have a great day.............
Miller Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 7:21 AM
Hi Paula, thank you so much.
Volumes Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Brought back memories. Haven't had persimmons for ages. My parents had a tree. It used to get loaded. Great poem Terry. BOL in the contest.
Miller Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 7:22 AM
Hi SV thank you again for your kind comments
Seeker Avatar
July 30, 2023 at 1:21 AM
A familiar tale ~ Enjoyed this exquisite, nostalgic write, Terry
Miller Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 7:22 AM
Thank you for your visit and kind comment
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