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Persecution

Pain
Pierces
Profoundly-
Penetrating 
Pangs

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Sponsor: Joseph May
'Light up the Page' contest
Placed 1st
© 16th March 2019

heartbrokenlanterne

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Angela Crabtree

December 13, 2020 at 1:25 PM

Very descriptive, Paul. I enjoyed it :)

Paul Callus

December 14, 2020 at 1:57 PM

Thank you, Angela. Best regards // paul

Jack Horne

March 22, 2019 at 3:04 PM

will have to try this form - love this one, Paul

Paul Callus

March 22, 2019 at 3:31 PM

Thank you, Jack. I believe I posted some @ Whispers once. Regards // paul

Arthur Vaso

March 21, 2019 at 2:49 AM

I love how much can be said in few words!!

Paul Callus

March 21, 2019 at 2:11 PM

Thank you, Arthur. Your thumbs up means a lot to me! Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

March 17, 2019 at 5:51 PM

Excellently done with just this one! Congrats, Paul.

Paul Callus

March 18, 2019 at 4:48 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Luck was on my side! Warm regards // paul

Chris Hagy

March 17, 2019 at 3:26 PM

Congrats Paul :) I like this one...you definitely got your Point across!... nothing new for me...too busy in real time...glad I had a minute today, have a great day Paul :)

Paul Callus

March 18, 2019 at 4:50 PM

Thank you, Chris. Being busy is a good sign:) Hope that you'll be posting something new soon. Warm regards // paul

Joanna Daniel

March 17, 2019 at 8:38 AM

A lovely lanterne well executed, Paul:) congratulations on your win:)

Paul Callus

March 18, 2019 at 4:47 PM

Thank you, Jo. Loved your winning bluebells entry, too! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 17, 2019 at 8:28 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

March 18, 2019 at 4:46 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise :) Regards & Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

March 17, 2019 at 8:20 AM

perfectly penned Paul! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

March 18, 2019 at 4:46 PM

Thank you Jan; enjoyed your winning entry, too. Hugs // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

March 17, 2019 at 2:22 AM

Wow, this is very impressive Paul. Congratulations on your first placement! I have never tried one of these, it looks like it might be a challenge. Happy St. Patrick's Day my friend! : ) xxoo

Paul Callus

March 18, 2019 at 4:45 PM

Thank you, Connie. I am sure you will be up to the challenge:) Hope you enjoyed St. Patrick's Day. Warm regards // paul