Don Johnson Poet Rhyme

Permeates

permeates

ah yes my sweet,
the bloody heat, 
permeates and thrills,
transfixed beguiled,
entranced awhile,
a steamy tale it builds,
explosive in its ending style,
deflating the hard inner child,
so subtle sweet, yet indiscrete,
who at the ending smiled.

re:  'Public Enemy -The Haiku-'

for p.d. who aint blue,
blessings babe from me 2u...

Don Johnson

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Poet Destroyer A November 25, 2012 at 9:23 PM Ha,,, look at me..I decided I wanted to snoop and read a few of your incoming poems,,, and look-y here,,, a poem for me... thank you very much... Thank you for the smiles Don,, always~ PD

David Williams November 25, 2012 at 12:21 PM Don, wish I could say the same, we are just getting drowned out with all the bloody rain, well done mate...Dave

Michael J. Falotico November 25, 2012 at 7:33 AM Very good my friend across the pond... she will love it I'm sure...Michael

Russell Sivey November 24, 2012 at 10:49 PM Marvelous, a simply marvelous and grandiose write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful and delightful poem this evening! This is a perfect dedication to our friend PD, Don! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!

Jon A Cavanaugh November 24, 2012 at 6:23 PM Fun poem. I loved the way it flowed. It brought a smile to my face.