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permeates ah yes my sweet, the bloody heat, permeates and thrills, transfixed beguiled, entranced awhile, a steamy tale it builds, explosive in its ending style, deflating the hard inner child, so subtle sweet, yet indiscrete, who at the ending smiled. re: 'Public Enemy -The Haiku-' for p.d. who aint blue, blessings babe from me 2u... Don Johnson

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Date: 11/25/2012 9:23:00 PM
Ha,,, look at me..I decided I wanted to snoop and read a few of your incoming poems,,, and look-y here,,, a poem for me... thank you very much... Thank you for the smiles Don,, always~ PD
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Date: 11/25/2012 12:21:00 PM
Don, wish I could say the same, we are just getting drowned out with all the bloody rain, well done mate...Dave
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Date: 11/25/2012 7:33:00 AM
Very good my friend across the pond... she will love it I'm sure...Michael
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Date: 11/24/2012 10:49:00 PM
Marvelous, a simply marvelous and grandiose write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wonderful and delightful poem this evening! This is a perfect dedication to our friend PD, Don! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/24/2012 6:23:00 PM
Fun poem. I loved the way it flowed. It brought a smile to my face.
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