Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Rhyme

Periodic Table of Elements

Periodic table of elements





Periodic table of elements,
the true heart of chemistry,
Law of periodicity clements,
Mendeleev is not a history !

Bonding between two hearts,
ignoring all the negatives,
When breaks and rips apart,
defying the electro positives,

Atoms randomly disperse,
Directionless, blinded and betrayed,
Valencies in their course traverse,
Swaying in the numbers brigade !







Written January 2nd, 2015
For contest "Periodic table of elements" by Anthony Slausen

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Millard Lowe April 14, 2025 at 8:33 AM Profound allegory of the supreme bonding of supreme love and its onderful oneness onement. One. Peace and Love.

Duke Beaufort March 19, 2025 at 9:47 AM Hi Doc U, I used to have a periodic table on the wall when I was a kid. Quite a thing Medeleev organized. The backbone of chemistry. Love is also a funny thing and the way you describe it does have some strange similarities to bonds. Take care. Smiles!

Margaret Franceschini March 17, 2025 at 10:18 AM Oh how you combined elements with love. Exquisite!

Manmath Dalei April 22, 2017 at 9:34 PM Very brilliant write. A perfect 7..........//with love

September 13, 2016 at 10:57 PM Superb thoughts

Maurice Yvonne January 15, 2015 at 5:44 PM I am with Sandra on this one a fav for me too.

M. L. Kiser January 15, 2015 at 5:07 AM Excellent! Much luck in the contest.

Sandra Haight January 9, 2015 at 4:10 PM Hi Dr. Upma, I just got to read your poem today, and found it amazing! I agree with the others...it's a winner for me. 7+Fav, Sandra

Debbie Guzzi January 8, 2015 at 2:59 PM I too would have placed it Upma, it fulfilled the requirements admirably. Light & Love

Verlena S. Walker January 7, 2015 at 9:50 PM Nice Upma, indeed a gem... Verlena

Paul Callus January 7, 2015 at 9:21 AM Hi Upma, I came in search of your entry; much impressed by this write, and would have liked to see it on the winners' list. #7 I understand you must have been a good science student! // paul

Harry Horsman January 7, 2015 at 5:22 AM love this, a joy to read...

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 4, 2015 at 6:46 AM good flow DR. Upma.. :)God bless and HAppy New year.. :)!

Debbie Guzzi January 3, 2015 at 7:56 PM Good entry my friend. Light & Love

Scott Thirtyseven January 3, 2015 at 6:05 AM I saw this contest and think the theme is very imaginative. I wondered what a poem of the Table of Elements would look like, and this one reads very fine indeed. Best of luck in the comp.

Jan Allison January 2, 2015 at 12:32 PM love your take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 2, 2015 at 10:17 AM You remind me of Chemistry classes Upma."Valencies in their course traverse" Good luck Love-rajat