Perhaps My Dreams Are All I Have

My dreams of us is all I have, uncertain if ever the day For us together seems so remote, with you so far away I fear our love may never see, the rising of the sun Our chances seem so awful slim and falling close to none My want and desire to be with you stays heavy on my mind And ways our heart can join in love, I desperately search to find But maybe the love which live in us, will never be what it seems Perhaps we’re destined to be in love, but only in my dreams Written in Queens, New York -AUG 2011

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Patrick Nigros

Date: 5/26/2015 7:30:00 AM

Amen..... WoW beautiful... I know how it feels when the sun does not shine to bring fantasies and dreams into perfect reality.... Keep Dreaming Sir....

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 3/20/2016 8:40:00 PM

I am so sorry to have not answered sooner. Last year was a very busy year for me...this one hasn't been as bad. Anyway, thank you for reading and your comment. It was very much appreciated... MC

Erika Little

Date: 5/22/2015 8:12:00 PM

Had to add this to my favorite. Superb job!!

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 5/25/2015 2:08:00 PM

Much appreciated! I will admit...this is one of my favorites as well. Thank you so much for your generous words and attention. MC

Honestly J.T.

Date: 5/16/2015 11:00:00 PM

Wow, I really enjoyed reading this poem. -JT

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 5/16/2015 11:31:00 PM

Hey JT, what's up Brother! It's been a while my man, I appreciate you stopping by once again. I'll have to check you out here soon, and I'm posting more of my stuff so continue to read and comment if you like. Thanks! MC

Judy Konos

Date: 5/16/2015 6:57:00 PM

My grandmother always said, "You can do anything you're big enough to do"...So if you really want...to find...this love...I do believe you will....Cheers....

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 5/16/2015 7:08:00 PM

Hi Judy...aren't our grandparents wise beyond their years??? Thank you for the insight, for reading and commenting. I really hope you enjoyed it! MC

The Grahamburglar

Date: 5/16/2015 6:35:00 PM

I'm with Jan, I hope you get there. Nice write and thanks for sharing this one.

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 5/16/2015 7:06:00 PM

Preston, thank you! I appreciate you stopping by, reading and commenting on my poem -thanks!!! MC

Jan Allison

Date: 5/16/2015 6:13:00 PM

I hope that one day your dreams come true:-) hugs jan xx

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 5/16/2015 6:28:00 PM

Hi Jan...thanks. I hope you enjoyed my short little poem. I really appreciate the comment. MC