Perfectly Imperfect

All that is beautiful belongs to her soul 
A natural vivid sense of energy blessed kind 
An imperfect perfection absolute not a role 
A brilliance so bright that in fact it blinds 

Expressed strongly in her belief with harmony 
Needless conceit for it was not in her nature
All craved for the beauty she held ardently 
Pointless like makeup to her was not major 

Beautiful vibes blossomed from inside 
Richest of spirits and a heart so very tender
Not good nor bad she had nothing to hide 
Lived life to its fullest with all of its splendor 

She was kind Poetry flowing with such grace 
When she spoke her voice sounded like angels 
Her essence was as pure as was her face 
Felt only love for all and for hate contained null

Hatred was not within her being 
For she saw only what was beauty 
Evil in the world she wasn’t seeing 
To bring joy to life she felt was her duty 


Inspired by my youngest Aaliya Marie ….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 1/31/2022 12:38:00 PM
What an eye-catching title Brenda, with really good rhyme and flow along with nice insightfulness. Hope all's good with you. Blessings always,Gordon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/5/2022 3:39:00 AM
Why thank you Gordon much appreciated!;)
Date: 1/26/2022 4:07:00 AM
What a treasure she is. Children are the best blessing the Lord can ever give us. This is beautiful Brenda. Blessings xxoo
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2022 4:40:00 AM
Yes they are Connie the greatest gift of all! Thank you!:)
Date: 1/19/2022 2:55:00 PM
I love both the title and the content, Brenda. Perfectly imperfect is usually applied to those persons who have a lovely character, and it certainly applies to the one who inspired this write. In fact, before I read the footnote, I had a feeling the writer was referring to herself :) ~ Hope you are keeping well, my friend. ~ Warm regards // paul
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2022 12:10:00 AM
Lol! Paul I am as imperfectly imperfect as we all are ! Bug Aaliya has an innocence about her still which makes it even better! Thank you so much !:)
Date: 1/16/2022 7:39:00 PM
Aaliya Marie must be a special angel, Brenda. Enjoyed your reflections on 'Perfect Imperfection!' Hope and Harmony, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2022 12:08:00 AM
A very special Angel at that Gershon thank you!:)
Date: 1/16/2022 1:16:00 PM
You shine with your beautiful lines, Brenda. The innocent that sees no evil, but love, util one day something will happen to change those ideas. Was nice to hear from you. Hugs girl
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2022 12:08:00 AM
Ahh Eve that’s so sweet of you to say! Thank you so much!:)
Date: 1/16/2022 7:53:00 AM
Beautifully said of Aaliya Marie... Lovely write, Brenda. Have a nice Sunday. Hugs Charlie
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2022 12:07:00 AM
Harley thank you so very much!:)
Date: 1/15/2022 11:22:00 PM
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/26/2022 12:07:00 AM
Lol victor I think you got to it before I had to redo it!;)
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