Perfection

Perfection exists
in a most imperfect place.
I thank God for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hobbs Avatar
November 3, 2019 at 11:43 PM
I has that parallel sentence sort of sense to it. Nice balance. I especially like the first 2 lines.
Staton Avatar
November 4, 2019 at 8:59 AM
Thanks for reading my work. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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December 19, 2015 at 7:00 PM
VALERIE:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year.. Good luck in all you do, just in case I don't stop a second time before the 2015 ends ~SKAT LOVE~
Kimathi Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 4:20 AM
A beautiful haiku and message! Congrats for being featured in the poetrysoup homepage Valerie! ;-)
Mehta Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 9:47 AM
A lovely thought, full wisdom, Valerie
Halliday Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 5:44 PM
Nice senryu!
Allison Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 5:32 PM
lovely haiku glad you have found perfection - you are truly blessed:-) hugs Jan xx
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