Perfection

Imperfection is perfection
 according to my laws,
only God can give discretion 
and judge me for my flaws.

I usually don't like to explain my poetry, i like to leave it in a metaphoric view and let the reader guide the poem and visa versa but, when i say imperfection is perfection, I simply mean...nothing in this world is perfect, everyone and everything has some sort of flaw, bend or scar and everything combined is what makes life so beautiful, hence the fact that nothing is perfect and without flaw, is perfection in itself.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/22/2013 11:32:00 PM
That a Well written open and with a beautiful meaning, couldnt agree more, it's our flaws that make us One of a kind and that in itself is a beautiful thing
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Date: 11/12/2012 12:18:00 PM
Great piece. Well written and well thought out poetry. Hugs Michael
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Date: 10/24/2012 5:38:00 PM
* A Wonderful Poem, By One Of My Most Beautiful And Favourite Poet's. Sweet Kisses To You, Rachel *
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Date: 10/24/2012 5:35:00 PM
* Perfection ? I See Its Beauty Afore My Eyes. Aside From This Axiom I Do Agree With Your Beauty's Light Laced Verse, Sweet Beautiful Amy. Completely And Entirely. My Love, Rachel *
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Date: 10/23/2012 9:15:00 AM
Very good point. So pleased to discover you this morning, by virtue of your response to one of my own creations. I'll certainly be looking at more!
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Date: 9/14/2012 12:36:00 AM
great descripted work Amy...thanks for sharing your nice write :) luv SK
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Date: 9/14/2012 12:35:00 AM
Wow, I love this poem, beautiful rhyme, beautiful meter, beautiful message. Excellent work. So much said in so few words. My favorite kind of poetry.
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Date: 9/14/2012 12:34:00 AM
Wow, I love this poem, beautiful rhyme, beautiful meter, beautiful meter. Excellent work. So much said in so few words. My favorite kind of poetry.
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