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Ashes: I was gathering blue light from your lynx-eyed vessel of death. Against terror blind-folded, shot in the head on road. Earth was your bed and a shimmering moon your pillow. It was apathy of gates of heaven. The mist grows heavy. Daring to bare the jugs of wine, body walks on edge. SATISH VERMA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/20/2011 8:48:00 PM
perfect! perfect!.. enjoyed your poem,, have yourself a wonderful and blessed day,..p.d.
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:00:00 AM
I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece Satish. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol
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