Perfect World

Darkness comes at night
and the days are clear as glass
in the perfect world
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 23, 2015 at 2:46 AM
i so love this one. dark and light what a combo
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 11:42 AM
The second line for me is pretty close to perfect!!
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