David Walker Poet Rhyme

Listen to poem:

Perfect World

Perfect World
David J Walker 
 
I close my eyes and become so
Perfectly still that hungry birds 
Forget I am there
I am invisible 
Even to the January air 
Hearing
            Seeing
                        Feeling
Believing that as long as I
Remain
            Quiet
Nothing is wrong in a perfect
World that cannot
See me as anything that
Doesn’t belong

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

FJ Thomas January 18, 2021 at 11:53 AM Sadly beautiful David. Yet the peacefulness is unmistakable. FJ Thomas January 19, 2021 at 9:15 PM It really does David. David Walker January 19, 2021 at 9:54 AM Thank you, FJ. That sort of peace seems elusive, doesn't it?