Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Perfect Rhymes Do Not Poetry Make

The larger the bird, the larger the turd
   The bigger the tart, the louder the fart
The more beans he ate, the darker his fate
   The more he drank, the more he stank

All the lines above rhyme perfectly internally
   Yet to call them poetry rankles eternally

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P.S. Awtry July 3, 2019 at 1:22 PM poetry is in the eye of the beholder ;) Love the title and the message and you made me laugh! Blessings :) ~ps Gershon Wolf July 3, 2019 at 1:26 PM This one is worth a chuckle or three, I guess... Thanks for letting me know. Best wishes, gw

Mike Dailey June 23, 2019 at 9:15 PM I like the way your mind works - a bit odd but - - - Gershon Wolf June 23, 2019 at 9:21 PM Yeah, this one is (more than a) bit odd... As far as minds working goes, thanks for the compliment---and the feeling's mutual, Mike. Thanks again, gw

Kim Rodrigues June 23, 2019 at 6:30 PM Don’t know about you, this rhyming’s cuckoo ;) Gershon Wolf June 23, 2019 at 7:05 PM But it's perfectly cuckoo, No?! Kim, you just have to develop an appreciation for 'Fine Rhyme!' LOL. LOL. LOL... You know, like I have. (LOL, if not barf out loud). ~ Burp, gw

Arturo Michael June 23, 2019 at 8:33 AM Maybe not...but this one makes a lot of sense... Gershon Wolf June 23, 2019 at 1:57 PM O.K. I can buy that, Arturo. Thanks for the view and your viewpoint. Best wishes, Gershon

Line Gauthier June 23, 2019 at 12:05 AM Your title says it all, Gershon. Gershon Wolf June 23, 2019 at 1:55 PM Yeah, it's clean too -- unlike the vulgarity of the four lines that followed. :) gw