Jesse Day Poet Rhyme

Perfect Love

I think of you and what I can do
to prove my love above all attraction.
I measure your smile employing no wile
and savor the perfect reaction.
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Type: Rhyme
Submitted: 02/13/2018
Contest: Romantic Charm in 4 Lines
Sponsor: Silent One

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Kyle Kriticos March 13, 2020 at 8:56 AM Very smoothly executed and catchy! A wonderful read!

Caren Krutsinger February 23, 2018 at 12:29 PM Congratulations on your win; a difficult assignment for many of us. Romance in 4 lines. What? Impossible for me. I applaud your poem. Jesse Day March 9, 2018 at 1:47 PM Thank you!

Line Gauthier February 18, 2018 at 3:21 PM Your poem is totally adorable, Jesse. Congrats on your well deserved win. Jesse Day March 9, 2018 at 1:47 PM Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2018 at 6:35 PM Ooooh, cool end line on this one!! Congrats for your win, Jesse. Jesse Day February 18, 2018 at 9:28 AM Thanks, Andrea!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2018 at 12:14 PM - Congratulations on this beautiful poem, Jesse :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jesse Day February 18, 2018 at 11:28 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Silent One February 14, 2018 at 9:05 AM Very romantic Jesse.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Jesse Day February 18, 2018 at 11:28 AM Thank you