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Perfect Love

I think of you and what I can do to prove my love above all attraction. I measure your smile employing no wile and savor the perfect reaction. ——————————————- Type: Rhyme Submitted: 02/13/2018 Contest: Romantic Charm in 4 Lines Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 3/13/2020 8:56:00 AM
Very smoothly executed and catchy! A wonderful read!
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Date: 2/23/2018 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win; a difficult assignment for many of us. Romance in 4 lines. What? Impossible for me. I applaud your poem.
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Jesse Day
Date: 3/9/2018 1:47:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/18/2018 3:21:00 PM
Your poem is totally adorable, Jesse. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Jesse Day
Date: 3/9/2018 1:47:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/15/2018 6:35:00 PM
Ooooh, cool end line on this one!! Congrats for your win, Jesse.
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Jesse Day
Date: 2/18/2018 9:28:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 2/14/2018 12:14:00 PM
- Congratulations on this beautiful poem, Jesse :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jesse Day
Date: 2/18/2018 11:28:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 2/14/2018 9:05:00 AM
Very romantic Jesse.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Jesse Day
Date: 2/18/2018 11:28:00 AM
Thank you

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