Perfect Landing

Letting your guard down
Puts you in dire standing
You can believe your frown
Or understand the landing
Which holds the demanding

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Schiavina Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 9:52 AM
Well done. Deep and it rhymes. Thank you for your comment on my poem I appreciate encouragement.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 1:29 AM
Wonderfully done my friend, Russell. Much enjoyed!
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 6:10 PM
very nicely rhymed!
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 6:10 PM
so why wouldn't you think I had lots of shoes? hahaha. Let me read your poem now.
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