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Perfect Is Her Name

The sun is jealous,because she is hot her face is smooth,it got no spot for beauty she a goddess,and here is her salute her voice so soft,like that of a flute She walks like a queen,making the world stand still even if a crime, for her a glance you would steal because giving a warm smile,to her is like a skill and thou an amateur,the game she know how to kill PERFECT is her name,because with no make up she looks the same i swear i would be a poacher,if she were a game shooting her with my romantic arrow,would be my aim and if my future was to be bright,she would be my dream

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Date: 8/25/2015 10:20:00 AM
oh what a dream of a write from start to finish - I simply adore that first line and the romantic imagery in the poem:-) hugs jan xx 7
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Stephen Githui
Date: 8/26/2015 6:52:00 AM
This poem made me believe the beautiful ones are now born

Book: Reflection on the Important Things