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Once upon time comes true in our end 

Perfect Feeling

Noble is the freedom that crowns jewels 
A thousand dreams awakens in each new day dawning 

The gift of giving and receiving loves antidote with truth 
Each day passing humbly accepting such blessings 

The voice of reason speaks our guardian belief 
Each and everyone of us hear the Echoing inside song 

Ocean waves turn warmly touch cotton without malice sing 
The smallest gesture softly held within a smile lights up 

Loving is living with everything becoming beautiful sparkles 
Hate becomes dead cast aside worthless rag
 
Moving out of darkness in light we see direction horizons beam 
A future rolls out the carpet of life sometimes lost 

Before the eyes standing with grace to cherish
an angel adoring unconditionally melts ore golden strings tug

A sacred place holds deep treasure inside the chest beating fondly
playing one diamond ring castle keeper turning keys tune 
 
Shining jewels behind the vision taken sparkling 
beyond question of doubt never losing faith 

Forever more at destiny's gate peace holding you 
The feather floats upon a breath landing breathless kiss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Andresen Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 12:26 PM
- Really perfect feelings ..... bring out the beautiful, have an open heart - This is beautiful, dear Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
November 1, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Hello Liam Mate!! Methinks you hit the target here with this extraordinary couplet write spot-on!! The message and the perfect blending of each verse are perfect!! Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Cw Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 12:43 PM
This poem is ever so beautiful, I had to try to catch my breath nearing the middle of it. The beauty and skill you hold within your gifted mind and pen extends far into one's reading mind and eyes. Take care and have a fantastic weekend.... Theresa
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 9:28 PM
Hi Liam!Another very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I truly enjoy it!A most beautiful,romantic,dreamy, most enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet!Just delightful!I just love it!A true glowing golden gem! Just perfect!Superb imagery!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Always keeping you in my prayers.Please take good care of yourself always.Keep your faith,love, hopes n' dreams!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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