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Once upon time comes true in our end 

Noble is the freedom that crowns jewels A thousand dreams awakens in each new day dawning The gift of giving and receiving loves antidote with truth Each day passing humbly accepting such blessings The voice of reason speaks our guardian belief Each and everyone of us hear the Echoing inside song Ocean waves turn warmly touch cotton without malice sing The smallest gesture softly held within a smile lights up Loving is living with everything becoming beautiful sparkles Hate becomes dead cast aside worthless rag Moving out of darkness in light we see direction horizons beam A future rolls out the carpet of life sometimes lost Before the eyes standing with grace to cherish an angel adoring unconditionally melts ore golden strings tug A sacred place holds deep treasure inside the chest beating fondly playing one diamond ring castle keeper turning keys tune Shining jewels behind the vision taken sparkling beyond question of doubt never losing faith Forever more at destiny's gate peace holding you The feather floats upon a breath landing breathless kiss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/1/2015 12:26:00 PM
- Really perfect feelings ..... bring out the beautiful, have an open heart - This is beautiful, dear Liam - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/1/2015 9:44:00 AM
Hello Liam Mate!! Methinks you hit the target here with this extraordinary couplet write spot-on!! The message and the perfect blending of each verse are perfect!! Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 10/31/2015 12:43:00 PM
This poem is ever so beautiful, I had to try to catch my breath nearing the middle of it. The beauty and skill you hold within your gifted mind and pen extends far into one's reading mind and eyes. Take care and have a fantastic weekend.... Theresa
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Date: 10/30/2015 9:28:00 PM
Hi Liam!Another very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden pen.I truly enjoy it!A most beautiful,romantic,dreamy, most enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful n' sweet!Just delightful!I just love it!A true glowing golden gem! Just perfect!Superb imagery!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Always keeping you in my prayers.Please take good care of yourself always.Keep your faith,love, hopes n' dreams!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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