Perfect Day

A beautiful day
 with the sky grey
A relaxing day
 with the pouring rain
A peaceful day
 with the blowing wind
Oh my perfect day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Al-Riyami Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 6:26 AM
watch your spelling and you could do to perfection!:) Great way with imagery
Devonshire Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 9:01 AM
A gentle poem that graces the reader with beautiful images and a sense of comfort! Excellent poem, Ashley! Love, Carolyn
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