Perfect Body

roses tied with satin ribbon's assistance, hang upside down from heaven. each one a breath of life forgiven. lights flicker in the distance with no resistance to another existence souls driven upward to heaven. 11/23/2020
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November 24, 2021 at 6:08 AM
It is marvelously propelling. It's a smear that so few appreciates our Creature's magnificent elegance.
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November 23, 2021 at 11:07 PM
Very inspirational. Pity few look up to our Creature for grace. Hugs.
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November 23, 2021 at 10:41 AM
I hope you are right as this earth is too polluted for another body . . . .
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