''Perfect''

Beneath the maple I lye in shade.
Relished in thoughts of love.
Looked toward the sky and found my heaven.
For I wait no more.
Hovered over my face.
I hear my husbands' voice.
It is clear to me now.
All I needed was him.
Oh' glorious day,let our secluded picnic begin.

''Picnic Contest''
sponsored by...Carol Brown
written by...Kacey Greenlee
kaceymike29
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2011 at 11:36 PM
Very nice, Kacey. Congrats on the HM
Devonshire Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Excellent poem, Kaycee. I love the way the sound of your husband's voice makes your picnic complete. Congratulations on your success in Carol's Picnic Contest! Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:23 PM
Congrats on your HM:)
Freeman Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 6:09 PM
Kacey, good to see you Honorably Mentioned with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
Taylor Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:51 AM
Congrats on your HM, Kacey. Nice going. Ralph
Mehta Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 7:12 AM
My congratulations on this HM win in the contest of carol, kacey
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:20 AM
Congrats Kacey on your HM in the picnic contest with this delightful write.. keep entering the contests and u will continue to be noticed my friend.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:01 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Kacey. Love, Carol
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