Perfect

Shh... Don't say a word, Just
Kiss me in the poring rain...
Let the water run down your face

Hear my heart beat, how it is pounding
Just because I'm with you
Wanting time to stay in place

The thunder is roaring, lightining flashing,
The rain is pouring, We Kiss... Passionatly
My heart stops, time stops....

...Just for one second....
Every thing is perfect
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 5:15 AM
Great passionate poem. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 6:11 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Rebekah. Love, Carol
Shahwan Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 6:06 AM
Beautiful poem and poised. Would you pls comment my poetry-Spring Links? I do appreciate it. Wishing you all the best and am looking forward to reading more of your poems.
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