Perchance

the one time chance the sweet romance, the thoughts of long ago, when love was spirited in its dance, but i had to let you go, but memory comes en-trance:( i know..... re Debby Duncan "A Kiss" Don

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David Williams

Date: 7/16/2012 8:14:00 AM

Don perchance I came along this and am glad I did...Dave

Deborah Price

Date: 7/16/2012 5:26:00 AM

Beautiful and emotional, what a wonderful read, thank you

Mad Hu

Date: 7/15/2012 11:28:00 PM

soooooooooooooo saddddddddddd .lovely write

Cindy Cayton

Date: 7/15/2012 9:29:00 PM

This is an excellent verse filled with so much depth in few words. I enjoyed that you are my last read forevermore here :) I left a sort of ode, atleast that's what I listed it under. Take good care Bubby, and ya know I love ya, Baby Lu

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/15/2012 6:37:00 PM

This is a brilliant write my friend! I really love this luxurious poem! The power of your words Don, so stupendous! "but i had to let you go," I just love that line as it covers your write elaborately! Fantastic write! Great Work!!