Lena Townsend Poet Rhyme

People Laughing

People laughing
Others drowning
Still left wanting
Never counting

Soul changing
Continues blaming
Sadness staying
Anger raging

Never counting
Still left wanting
I am crying
People laughing

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Nicole Sharon Brown December 6, 2009 at 6:09 PM Remarkably written! I love the repetition.

Michael Degenhardt June 11, 2008 at 4:38 AM This is a very fast and fluid read. The flow isso smooth and the read effortless. Your words provide great clarity through the descriptions you give thereby allowing a keen understnding. Very well written. Michael