People I Love

All alone sitting here feeling lost,
I hate this life,
I don't even know why, 
I meet certain people in my life,
I feel frustrated inside,
I hate the people I love,
So much that I don't know how to explain,
People I love hurt me the most,
I hate to love someone the most,
Willing to do anything for these who I love,
But when I ask them for a simple favore,
They walk away from it,
And say my way or the high way!
Is that fair? What they do?
All they care about is themselves,
How there life is complicated,
Its all about them,
They don't know what is love,
Or where it comes from,
They might say it,
But their actions says otherwise,
Love, love, love is all in the air,
Falling all over like rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/26/2009 3:10:00 AM
I will write one for you, check my next poem,
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Date: 9/6/2009 5:56:00 AM
There is some reality to this poem. I have known these things to take place. When I listen to the stories from others they are breath taking at time. You're onto reality in poetry. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 8/26/2009 6:31:00 AM
I know exactly how you feel, I can't even vent to my family without getting lectured
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Date: 8/26/2009 6:26:00 AM
I am so happy to be able to read your amazing poetry today Shirin. I thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/26/2009 4:12:00 AM
The emotions in the poem is very raw and real..the voice really let it all out....honest write..
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Date: 8/26/2009 3:46:00 AM
Interesting topic for a poem. Is this just a topic or really happening? Sara
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