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Walking, sitting, talking everywhere People standing, please don't stare Running, Jogging around the park Please don't go there after dark. Screaming, yelling, children shout Mothers queuing at the checkout Singing, dancing, laughing, crying Babies born people dying. Daylight now is growing dim Chance of a visitor now slim Settling in the old armchair I'm sure I should be elsewhere. Talking on the mobile phone Sat at home all alone Locking up for the night Waiting for tomorrows daylight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/3/2012 8:54:00 AM
reminds me of my poem i wrote a few years back called perpetual verse cool rhyme pattern xx davidscott
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 10/3/2012 2:11:00 PM
Is it on here David?
Date: 10/3/2012 8:54:00 AM
I like it, but you need to edit here and there as some word are not separated, like these, Peoplestanding
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Hazel Connelly
Date: 10/3/2012 2:10:00 PM
already did it as you was posting.

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