Pentecost

H oly Spirit on us fall O nce,and for all P ower in the wind & fire E mpowerment that will never tire

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David Smalling

Date: 6/9/2009 7:03:00 AM

I like this, Brian. Edit line 3 and let the beauty roll like tongues upon the ears.

Charlene Bird

Date: 5/31/2009 8:37:00 PM

An inspirational and moving acrostic Brian, your word always move like liquid gold.

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/30/2009 1:09:00 PM

Uuu that was a cool one, the last two last felt...don't know how to describe them...they just..felt...=) awsome, thanks for the experience!!=D

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/30/2009 10:17:00 AM

Powerful acrostic, rich in spiritual beauty. Touching the beliefs of all who read. Love, Shar

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 5/30/2009 9:22:00 AM

The strength we need. The hope we pray for. Vince

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/30/2009 3:46:00 AM

This verse should hang above every bedpost, Brian. i know I could use the reminder from time to time. awesome. love, Kristin

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 5/30/2009 2:15:00 AM

A strong and faithful acrostic form! Keep penning...Anna-Marie.

Diane Christian

Date: 5/29/2009 11:09:00 AM

Amen Brian, he will always keep filling us with his Holy Spirit , Titus 3 :6 he poured out His Holy Spirit upon us generously through Jesus Christ our Savior, Amen God bless you Brian from diane

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/29/2009 10:40:00 AM

Acts chapter two..powerful write..powerful bible chapter...I have a little Jesus in me Brain..LOL