Pentecost

H  oly Spirit on us fall
O  nce,and for all
P  ower in the wind & fire
E  mpowerment that will never tire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smalling Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 7:03 AM
I like this, Brian. Edit line 3 and let the beauty roll like tongues upon the ears.
Bird Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 8:37 PM
An inspirational and moving acrostic Brian, your word always move like liquid gold.
Cantu Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 1:09 PM
Uuu that was a cool one, the last two last felt...don't know how to describe them...they just..felt...=) awsome, thanks for the experience!!=D
Winter Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 10:17 AM
Powerful acrostic, rich in spiritual beauty. Touching the beliefs of all who read. Love, Shar
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 9:22 AM
The strength we need. The hope we pray for. Vince
Reynolds Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 3:46 AM
This verse should hang above every bedpost, Brian. i know I could use the reminder from time to time. awesome. love, Kristin
Docherty Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 2:15 AM
A strong and faithful acrostic form! Keep penning...Anna-Marie.
Christian Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 11:09 AM
Amen Brian, he will always keep filling us with his Holy Spirit , Titus 3 :6 he poured out His Holy Spirit upon us generously through Jesus Christ our Savior, Amen God bless you Brian from diane
Higgins Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 10:40 AM
Acts chapter two..powerful write..powerful bible chapter...I have a little Jesus in me Brain..LOL
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