Pensee

Knowledge palace Filled with future fantasies Diving in new and new vocabularies Fast door of success Wonderful school!

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Holly Moore

Date: 12/7/2012 10:18:00 AM

This is really clever...I write a lot of cinquains, too. But, I use the traditional syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 2. I've never tried this type. I'll have to give it a go..Hugs, Holly Moore

Ajayi Angel-Simon

Date: 12/1/2012 7:59:00 AM

hahahahahahahahahaha... wow! short but wonderful... "knowledge palace filled with future fantasies" Graduation gown filled with present realities... lol... Nice piece Janet. Love ... Angel

Janet Muthoni
Date: 12/2/2012 4:18:00 AM

thanx simon for your encouragement.....