Pensee

Knowledge palace
Filled with future fantasies
Diving in new and new vocabularies
Fast door of success
Wonderful school!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Moore Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 10:18 AM
This is really clever...I write a lot of cinquains, too. But, I use the traditional syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 2. I've never tried this type. I'll have to give it a go..Hugs, Holly Moore
Angel-Simon Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 7:59 AM
hahahahahahahahahaha... wow! short but wonderful... "knowledge palace filled with future fantasies" Graduation gown filled with present realities... lol... Nice piece Janet. Love ... Angel
Muthoni Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 4:18 AM
thanx simon for your encouragement.....
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