Pen's Lament

I miss good old days
 When people embraced me,now
  All is digital
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Devnath  Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:37 PM
Wonderful job in a Senryu. Read and enjoyed well. A 7. Loved always, bl
Dietrich Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 3:55 PM
this is a great idea for this short form. Love it!! (call it senryu!)
Kannan Avatar
October 19, 2016 at 7:01 AM
Thank you so much Andrea..Glad you loved it..Done...
Dalei Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 5:17 AM
But Supraja is still with pen. Ha..ha...Well expressed dear Supraja. A7.............//Manmath
Kannan Avatar
October 18, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Ha ha...Thank you so much for dropping by...
Onclaud Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 11:46 AM
i will not be party to this kind of gadget connect where all is illusion.. man is the basis of life, not technology... applause to you for a benevolent heart, supraja..huggs
Kannan Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:35 AM
So true words...Thank you so much for dropping by Nette...Glad you liked it...
Trifiatis Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 6:26 PM
A harsh reality dear, Supraja, that more and more people have to live with! Excellent!
Kannan Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:34 AM
True indeed... Thank you so much for stopping by Demetrios...
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 12:57 PM
- I send you a big hugs anyway, Supraja :) - Well done in a haiku (Haiku very old form) - // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:33 AM
Thank you for your warm wishes Anne...So glad you liked it...
Turner Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 8:18 AM
You seem pretty young, Supraja. I remember back so far they didn't even have a date for it, they just called it "hard times" I Love your poem:)
Kannan Avatar
October 17, 2016 at 5:31 AM
Thanks for sharing the info Daniel...Thank you for stopping by and I am so glad you loved it...
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