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Penetration

Deep questions of life Jab like a knife! Still missing the God? Don't be struck by a rod! Why can't I let myself be The idiot I'm not you see!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/23/2010 4:48:00 PM
joshua, this one is ok, but the last little part confused me a bit. I could not tell quite what you were saying in your last line!
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Date: 5/26/2010 2:31:00 PM
nice..
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