Penetration

Deep questions of life
Jab like a knife!

Still missing the God?
Don't be struck by a rod!

Why can't I let myself be
The idiot I'm not you see!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 4:48 PM
joshua, this one is ok, but the last little part confused me a bit. I could not tell quite what you were saying in your last line!
Carr Avatar
May 26, 2010 at 2:31 PM
nice..
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