Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

Penetrates

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.                         Light rays penetrates
                                        
                                           
                                                   Son comes to the water, shore
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.                                                                               Bringing gold to stony earth

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Gert W. Knop March 29, 2010 at 4:11 AM Lovely Haiku, Sara! I borrowed from our library a book with translated Japanese Haiku ---I do love those!!! 32 years ago I met a Japanese (Ichi) who also wrote poetry, a very nice guy and a pity that I lost his address. Have a happy Easter and thank you for your comments...Gert

John Freeman March 25, 2010 at 5:38 PM I certainly agree with this penetrating light. And that little bird, that tells us of Agape, lit upon his sholders when he came out of the waters. Awesome, Job,Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 25, 2010 at 11:48 AM Wonderful Haiku Sara and if for the new contest ..much good luck.. like the way u set this one up also ..it expounds on the words to penetrate the mind..luv.. Linda-Marie

Faleshia Murphy March 25, 2010 at 7:58 AM very nice loved it faleshia

Nick Bagnall March 25, 2010 at 6:01 AM Your peom creates a beautiful image in my mind - Thank you

Doris Culverhouse March 25, 2010 at 5:48 AM enjoyed today...keep sharing