Penalty

PENALTY

                                   This desert- sands dust heat
                                     Mind narrow and fettered
                                     Tagged with God's penalty











©rajat kanti chakrabarty
09 December, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 8:48 AM
SO much content...meaning in few words, Rajat! Excellent write...hugs, Rhonda
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 10:13 AM
Thank you Rhonda. Hugs! xxxx rajat
Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:31 AM
I am thinking very good metaphors..We do get in those desert places at times..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:42 AM
Thank you Sara. You are a lovely poet. I like your style very much.Hugs! ...rajat
Meade Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Barren and dry you will be .... thus is your destiny!! Oh, if we could understand the mind of God!! Well, maybe not!! Nicely done dear lovely friend.
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 9, 2014 at 9:49 AM
Just imagine David some lizards thrive in desert only.They can squeeze out best from God's penalty. But we humans are so blunt that we throw down God's well chosen gifts.Love XXX rajat
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