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Ziket: 2-line poetry form invented by Dr,Zik: 1st line max 8 syllables, 2nd line max 5 syllables

Pen In Hand

Painting in extreme brevity
   ~  poignant images



Ziket: a 2-line poem comprised of 5-8 syllables in 1st line, 5 syllables in 2nd line

AP: 3rd place 2025

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2020

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Andrea Dietrich

August 13, 2020 at 4:41 PM

very nice, LIne. I came to see if you like dashes after line one. Maybe not important in this form!!

August 13, 2020 at 7:39 PM

Dashes not required, neither is a "turn" like in haiku.

Newton Ranaweera

August 12, 2020 at 5:29 PM

A great painting, indeed!!

August 12, 2020 at 9:59 PM

Thank you, Newton. Much appreciated.

August 12, 2020 at 9:44 AM

A new poetry form for me to learn! Nicely done, Line. I'll have to try it. ~Mark

August 12, 2020 at 10:56 AM

Thankfully the learning curve is not too harsh for this one ~

August 12, 2020 at 2:57 AM

Lovely write Line..

August 12, 2020 at 7:06 AM

Thanks, Jenish. Much appreciated.

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