Notes About The Poem

Sept. 23, 2023   8.34am

 

 

Peer Teaching

Our teacher says, “By peer teaching you can learn,
You can share your thoughts lovingly through cooperation”
But there’s always a big problem with my peer partner, Fern 
She's quite clumsy! Keeps dropping her stuffs when it’s my turn.

She crawls on the floor to get things, taking time to get up,
Her attention is so shallow, my patience is no longer enough;
Just enjoy crawling on the floor my friend, I won’t let you stop,
Anyways, you’re the best student in this class… always at the top.

I’ll just lay down cozily my head on our old school desk,
Thanks for sharing your bright ideas, clarifying things and all the rest;
I fervently hope you won’t hurt your knees, back and neck,
And nobody will find you crawling on the floor especially Mrs. Leclercq.
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Gasun Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 7:53 PM
Voice Contest Judged: 9/24/2023 8:09:00 PM Sponsored by: Eve Roper Place 1 (out of 3rd place multi-w)
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September 25, 2023 at 12:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem...lovely described, Leonora :) - A really great picture :) - hugs
Gasun Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 9:35 PM
Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Anne-Lise. May God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Roper Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 8:31 PM
Congratulations on your win, Len. I love that you complimented the peer learning, when one misses something the other can help see. ( Buddy System) Many blessings to you
Gasun Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 9:34 PM
Thank you so much for recognizing/acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Eve. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. Thank you, thank you so much. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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