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Peeling Onions

What I tell my friends if they should ask if I’m okay Is I’ve been peeling onions ever since you went away I don’t know what I’m meant to say so I can make them see That I’ll be peeling onions until you come back to me Another day another sigh but I shall never cry The tear upon my cheek is down to something in my eye When you walked away with not so much as a goodbye Could you not have offered me the slightest reason why But since the day I heard you’d left me for another guy I seem to find that peeling onions helps the time go by Another day another sigh but I shall never cry The tear upon my cheek is down to something in my eye There comes a time when even friends no longer want to know And point out, “You’ve been peeling onions for a month or so.” So am I done with peeling onions? I’m not sure I know Is it time I figured out that I must let you go Another day another sigh but I shall never cry The tear upon my cheek is down to something in my eye Your best friend set me up so I would be sat here with you She did let slip the news that you’d been peeling onions too I was tempted when you said could we get back together But I’ve peeled lots of onions; I won’t peel another - ever

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Date: 11/20/2022 8:11:00 PM
No more onions, though I hear they remove bunions...
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/21/2022 10:48:00 AM
My imaginary fem fatale was a horrible conniving woman, GW… but she wasn’t a bunion. Ha ha.
Date: 11/20/2022 1:01:00 PM
this should be set to music, terry! wonderfully told with a perfect chorus just waiting to be sung...
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/20/2022 1:58:00 PM
I frequently write to a beat/tune, Ilene. Ironically, although I thought of this as a sing songy thingy, I never actually had a tune in mind for it. Glad you enjoyed my brief foray into the miserable ;-) Terry
Date: 11/20/2022 8:56:00 AM
A good way of thinking, Terry. Once burned, twice shy!
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/20/2022 10:33:00 AM
Never experienced this, Milt [by God, I must be special] but I sure know that those onions give you runny eyes. Terry
Date: 11/20/2022 7:48:00 AM
I love this Terry…..cleverly written! No more onions in your soup EVER! Really enjoyed! Debx
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/20/2022 8:25:00 AM
Thanks, Deb. I saw the view count rising and thought this had misfired. So I’m chuffed that you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 11/20/2022 6:04:00 AM
Terry, you do know that people will look for the punchline in this, don’t you? Terry
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Terry Flood
Date: 11/20/2022 8:40:00 AM
Cos I’m totally loony toons ;-) wait till I start quarrelling with myself!
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Deb M
Date: 11/20/2022 7:45:00 AM
Why you writing to yourself Terry Ha!!

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